Monday 4 June 2012

Harsh Truth!





Endless, intense pain
locks away all emotions;
Heart is but a stone.


Written for: Haiku Heights.


31 comments:

  1. That was painful!
    Such situation comes after when heart being burlesque and betrayed again and again.

    You expressed the harsh truth beautifully , Ayesha :)

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  2. yes it is painful ...
    Wonderful haiku..
    http://anu-dailypost.blogspot.in/2012/06/love-in-shape-of-lock.html

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  3. Lots of emotion behind this haiku. It goes well with the picture.

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    1. Thanks for the appreciation, Kendall. :)

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  4. I like both the picture and the haïku! Thank you!


    Dure vérité

    Infinie, une peine intense
    met sous clé toutes les émotions;
    Le cœur n'est qu'une pierre.

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    1. Thanks, Claude! :)
      And thank you so much for the French version. :)

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  5. What an emotional haiku. Often, we need to break past a heart of stone and feel more deeply. Nicely written.

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    1. Yes, and sometimes it takes a lot of effort to do so. But we need to keep trying because human is emotion. :)
      Thanks for the lovely comment. :)

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  6. I guess you're right. :)
    Thanks for stopping by. :)

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  7. Powerful words, and sadly so often true.

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  8. Well, I suppose there are advantages to having a heart of stone, although I can't think of one at the moment...

    The Lock Begins to Sing

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  9. aww..i wonder what made you conclude that "heart is but a stone"..good work here :)

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    1. Endless and intense pain. :)
      Thanks, Sanjana. :)

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  10. This is sad....but beautiful haiku :)

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  11. same views as that of Valli,. A compliment to blog- beautiful layout and well placed words, good work!

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  12. Ouch. A stone heart sounds painful :)

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    1. Feels painful too!
      Thanks for stopping by. :)

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  13. I relate to pain
    That intensity each beat
    No escape in sight

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    1. I can totally feel this. Thanks for sharing. :)

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    1. It's not always love that causes pain. :)
      Thanks for the visit. :)

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