Friday 3 February 2012

Day 3: Paint the image.



Hands worn out with age
long for a soft touch; Disdain
torments the frail heart.

26 comments:

  1. This is painful...It is so sad when the elderly end their days without love's touch

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  2. Sadly beautiful.. Loved it..

    Someone is Special

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  3. So true. I love the balance in this 'photo-haiga', thank you. Very well done.

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    1. Yes. It hurts to see that their only wish in their last moments of life is so brutally overlooked! :(

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  5. You have captured the pain written into the hands beautifully!

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    1. Thanks! I really hope nobody goes through it!

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  6. Sad images...lovely haiku ~

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  7. Beautifully expressed the helplessness..

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    1. Thanks! Their helplessness makes me feel so helpless!

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  8. The plight of the elderly. This brought tears to my eyes.

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    1. I'm glad this haiku conveyed the message as i wanted it to!

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  9. wonderfully conveyed message!

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