Saturday 4 February 2012

Day 4: Positively Contrasting Emotions.


Tears adorn your face;
Blissful smile beautifies mine
'Cause they show your care.



Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012
 Day 4 – February 4th – Theme: Opposite Emotions
Posted by at 00:03

21 comments:

  1. ...4 February 2012 at 00:14

    Lovely!

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  2. br!nDle4 February 2012 at 00:18

    So Nicely compared...awesome...(:

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  3. Susie Clevenger4 February 2012 at 01:48

    Beautiful haiku

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  4. Gemma Wiseman4 February 2012 at 02:29

    O how very lovely! Tears can generate happiness!

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  5. RaNiiiiii4 February 2012 at 02:44

    nice meaning in ur haiku!

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  6. Someone is Special4 February 2012 at 04:41

    'Truly and heartily' Loved your Haiku...

    Someone is Special

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  7. becca givens4 February 2012 at 12:08

    Quite nice contrast!!

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  8. Chèvrefeuille4 February 2012 at 12:20

    Great one, love how you have used "opposite emotions".

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  9. Simran4 February 2012 at 20:01

    Sweet and loving!

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  10. Karen4 February 2012 at 22:27

    Very touching.

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  11. Vidya Sury4 February 2012 at 22:45

    So sweet! We both seem to have had similar thoughts!

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  12. Ramesh Sood4 February 2012 at 22:50

    This is very beautiful..loved it..

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  13. kaykuala5 February 2012 at 00:08

    Love it Amber! A clever way of pushing the contrast elements and getting the right effects. Great haiku!

    Hank

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